When I evaluate trees for bonsai, first I look for what the tree already has to offer and try to use it. This tree has nothing to offer except for the time that it took to grow that bit of straight base trunk section. From the first branch up, it is worthless. Take the wire off, you will never use those branches or upper trunk in a decent tree. The nebari is horrendous and will have to be completely ground layered off.
So, take it out of the bonsai pot, put it in a training pot, ground layer the trunk and let it grow wild for several years to develop some flair into the new roots, get some more girth and then decide where to chop to start a new top.
Considering what you would have to do to make this a decent tree, I think you got robbed. If you have five trees like this, you would be better of buying a $25 piece of decent starter stock.
When buying such material, always start with the nebari. It is the most difficult aspect to correct and takes the longest and the most skill. If you find a piece of material with a decent nebari already, BUY IT, no matter what the rest of the tree looks like. You can grow an entire new tree on top of the nebari in much shorter time than you can correct a miserable nebari on a promising top. I would never have got past the nebari on this tree. I can't tell you how many beginner trees I have seen that have had DECADES of work but are still junk because the root work was never done.
As long as we are talking about beginners: I've said it a million times on forums, but I will say it again: If you have a one inch trunk, you have a six inch tall tree, don't even both looking at the rest of tree. Why? If you are going to keep it at six inches (the infamous 1:6 ratio trunk to height), then the tree must already exist (or have the potential to exist) in those six inches. If you are going to grow it out, nothing above those six inches is going to matter anyhow, most likely it will all be cut off at some point.
Bonsai is rarely modification (except in yamadori or really excellent pre material), it almost always about growing your vision. You have to train your eye before you can train your tree.
Brent
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